Mid Year review

These last two terms in Ako Ngatahi I think that I have been a bit bad at doing my work on time and putting it up, but next term I hope to improve by putting up and finishing work in the time frame I'm given. I think that I can improve by not sitting by someone that will distract me from doing my work. I also think that I might need to work in a quiet working environment. I know that I need to improve my letter and number formation. When planning my work, I need to make sure I am being realistic about the amount of work that I can do in the time I am given. I feel that I have a negative attitude about both learning and my own abilities and that this is impacting on my work. I need to work on adjusting my attitude, I think that this will help me learn better and help me finish work on time.

Loch Ness monster

W.A.L.T make a DLO when we record our speech.

I made this DLO to share my speech with the world. We wrote our speech. Then we had to make it we had to make a google slide that go's with our speech. Then we had to record our speech like I have. If you think that I have something I need to improve please tell me by commenting. bye

Loch Ness Monster

I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

I have made a presentation on the Loch Ness Monster I the have been doing research on for weeks. Pleas leave a comment, enjoy.

Maths DLO

W.A.L.T Double and halve to solve multiplication problems

this week we have been learning to double and halve. this is a good strategy to use for hard

times table questions. hope you enjoy.

Bigfoot Wanted

W.A.L.T create a wanted poster for one of the mysteries we have been learning about

Success Criteria

I have made a wanted poster about big foot. What I did first was I wrote wanted at the top then i did the picture. after that I did the fake reward and then the information wanted

I think it is cool but it toke me to long

Nemo The War Dog

 I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

I am learning to put new ideas from the text with my prior knowledge or other text to develop new ideas and understandings.

I have made a sculpture about Nemo the war dog who kept his owner safe from death after he was shout in the shoulder and fell unctions.

I made this because I thought he was a special dog because he saved his solder from death.

the first thing I did to make it was to make a brick out of mod ling clay then I made the sculpture of Nemo and then put him on top of the clay brick.

I think this is good but I think I need to learn how to manege my time better.

My Fantasy storry

W.A.L.T write a fantasy story. After this I feel happy but a little disappointed. pleas leave A comment.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when it includes…

• A Description of the fantasy world
• A Problem
• A description of how the problem is solved (resolution)
• The journey back to the real world
• A description about how the character feels

When I woke up I saw  trees and giant mushrooms and a boy leaning over me. He said “you're from up there” and he pointed up then he said follow me back to my house. Then we started to walk to his house.

On the way we saw all sorts of weird creatures and plants and even a volcano but no more people then after about half an hour later I could see a house in the distance. Then he said stop but it was too late I fall in a trap and fall down a big hole.

Then 5 hours later someone lowerd a rope down the hole so I grab it. When I get to the top I am grabbed by Some bad  crazy wolf man he said that he will turn me into a dead rat and then eat me so that I won’ t get back to the real world. Then he dug his claws into my rist’s. It was so painful i screamed. Then he began to drag me towards the  black forest were all of the trees were dead and these black gorilla re monster things lived then he pointed at a big black hole in the side of a small hill then we went in and he said “ welcome to the place you diy”.

Then he let go i ran for the door but I saw about 17 gorilla re monster thins at the cave entrance. then I saw a gun on the wall. I then  said “ I give up ”then I ran for the and shoot him ten times then stabbed him three then I saw some time bomes. I set the bombs to go off in ten minutes then ran for my life then ten minutes later I heard a big big big BANG! he was dead.

then I thought how will I get home. I thought long and hard then I remembered the volcano I could climb up the it and make a gap And sqes throw then go home but on the way I found a big hole in the path. In the hole there was a dragon that was tied down with chan then somehow the dragon broke the chain then took me into a bunch of underground tunnels filled with lava then we went up throw the volcano. then back into the relle world then he took the dragon home to remember all the fun he had on his advcher.